At least all the vamps I ever knew were pretty averse to anything related to digestion! Maybe this crew is just doing it to make art out of it or something. Some big satanic piece made of strewn entrails to summon some ancient one.
No I haven’t, but now I have to add that to my watch list. I took some inspo from Blade at the club scene… should have added blood sprinklers tbh that woulda been kinda cool 😅
I want to write a flash fiction for February too. I might not, but this was inspiring! Glad you wrote this. It's an interesting take on a spooky party story :)
Holy shit!
So romantic right?
Better him than me
😂
Amazing twist!!!! This was so real in the beginning from parties I’ve been to! I was not expecting it to me a man eating cult 😂
You know what’s funny. Some said vamps. But I never put thought into “what0 the were. Man eaters sounds pretty badass though
I thought maybe vampires too but they don’t like intestines so it definitely felt man eating cult like for me!
You don’t think vamps have their own type of menudo? 😂😂😂
At least all the vamps I ever knew were pretty averse to anything related to digestion! Maybe this crew is just doing it to make art out of it or something. Some big satanic piece made of strewn entrails to summon some ancient one.
Ooo I want to do something else on the Maneater cult now
I was hoping you'd say that! Just write it! ,3
Love where this went! 🩸🖤🔥
I feel bad for her. He probably tastes like creatine and whey
Especially that bicep 😂
😂💪
More like 💪🏽🤤😋
Lmao the drool emoji 😂
😂
Oh this was fun. Loved the ending.
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
Fantastic. Great twist at the end. I enjoyed that.
Appreciate the feedback Gary 🙏
Still new to the micro format, it’s definitely a challenge to pack a full story into 500 or so words
Wait. What?
Did I do a twist? 👉👈
I guess?
Love the twist.
Thank you 🙏
Surprised so many made it to the end 😅
I came across your notes and now I am reading your work this is absolutely amazing thanks for writing this 🫶
Thanks for reading 😁
My works a little all over the place as I figure this whole writing thing out.
That's a good one. Really cool.
Thank you 🙏
Yooooooo I hope he enjoyed that coke and whiskey.
Crazy story. Reminds me of the opening to the Blade film. Loss of bodily control is such a fear urghhhh.
Brother knows!
That was the exact scene I had in my head while writing. Love Blade
Pretty great subversion that reminds me of the end of Maniac (1980) if you ever seen that movie. Great work!
No I haven’t, but now I have to add that to my watch list. I took some inspo from Blade at the club scene… should have added blood sprinklers tbh that woulda been kinda cool 😅
If only creeps in real life met this same ending. Great writing- the mentality of the man made me physically uncomfortable.
Yeah, I wanted not to make him very unlikable. Glad it worked 😂
The bicep moment almost made me gag lmao
Some Jersey Shore shit 😂
Short but damn effective, well done!
Thank you, this is the second attempt at flash-horror. The first draft was a hot mess, but I’m happy with the final :)
I want to write a flash fiction for February too. I might not, but this was inspiring! Glad you wrote this. It's an interesting take on a spooky party story :)
It’s been fun. A lot less stress than serials and short stories
I don't know about you, but I'm hiding! 😶🌫️😉
Is that an intestine in your pocket or......... I enjoyed this, I knew something was wrong when she walked up.
Lmfao 🤣
Glad you enjoyed it sir, welcome back to the stack
Thank you. Good to be back